Super planning shots thus far but much more needs to be done re evaluating all aspects of mise-en-scene and explaining whether your music video conforms or develops or challenges the codes and conventions of the ska genre.You need to be getting a move on Harley
You need to post story boards, evaluate the casting of your performers, and so on. Your slide shows are very good but since you constructed the slide show which evaluates your locations you may have more to add to this. Could you get the rest of your planning onto your blog as soon as possible. Also note that to achieve a strong grade your planning should strongly reflect research into similar artists in music videos, TV programmes or feature films.